TR #1 Master of what exactly?

For me, the decision was relatively simple. I wasn’t done with the knowledge I had gained during my bachelor’s studies. Several of the projects I was working on felt unfinished, and I believed they had a future beyond the university context.

The research I was most deeply involved in focused on Yugoslavia and the Balkan region. Coming from the Balkans is not just a geographical fact for me—it shapes how I think, work, and create. It carries a complex history of fragmentation, and resilience, but also a strong sense of shared culture, shared contradictions, and collective memory. This background influences the questions I ask and the themes I repeatedly return to in my work.

My bachelor’s thesis is closely connected to LGBTQ+ identities and rights, and to how these are understood and lived in the Balkans and then Yugoslavia. I was interested in the tension between visibility and safety, progress and backlash, and in how legal rights, social acceptance, and everyday realities often do not move at the same pace. Looking at the Yugoslav past alongside the current political and cultural climate helped me understand how ideas of freedom, community, and solidarity have shifted over time.

Continuing with a master’s degree felt like a natural next step to deepen this research. It offered the space to further explore questions of identity, belonging, and resistance, and to critically examine how personal experience can become a political and artistic position. For me, staying in academia was not about postponing “real life,” but about giving these topics the time, care, and complexity they require.

Critical review of “Microbiophonic Emergences” by Adomas Palekas (Master’s Thesis, Institute of Sonology, 2024)

Adomas Palekas’s master’s thesis, entitled Microbiophonic Emergences, could be described as an interdisciplinary mixture of artistic reflection, philosophical speculation, and experimental sound practice. Combining ecological thought and artistic research, the text examines the relationship between sound, life, and perception. Drawing upon the Gaia hypothesis and Goethean science, the author advances a more sensitive and ethical mode of listening wherein the boundaries between the art and scientific observation are dissolved.

Overall, the presentation of the work is considerate and visually well-structured, though it significantly deviates from academic conventions. A clearly defined research question, hypothesis, or structured methodology is lacking. Instead, the text comes across as a long essay on listening, nature, and non-human agency. Its first half is dedicated to theoretical reflections on sound as a living force, while the second half introduces a series of artistic experiments and installations entitled Kwass Fermenter, Microbial Music I–III (On Bread, Compost and Haze, Aerials), Rehydration, Infection, Spectrum of Mutations: Myosin III and Kwassic Motion. According to the author, these works constitute a coherent artistic ecosystem in which microorganisms and sonic feedback interact.

More conceptually, this framing of sonification as bi-directional means that sound should not just be generated from biological data but is also to be sent back into the system and used to affect it. Conceptually, this approach seeks to transform sonification into a dialogue rather than a representation. This claim of originality, however, feels somewhat overstated: bi-directional or feedback-based sonification has been explored conceptually and practically by many artists and researchers before him, mostly within the frames of bio-art and ecological sound practices. Palekas himself mentions only one precedent when, in fact, there exists a wide range of comparable works dealing with translating biological activity into sound and then re-introducing it into the same system. His treatment of the topic is therefore limited and without deep contextual awareness, giving the impression of a rediscovery of ideas that are well conceptualized in the discipline.

The artistic independence of the thesis and a strong, personal vision are explicit. Palekas’s voice is consistent; his writing also reflects genuine curiosity and sensitivity. But it is this very independence that alienates his research from the broader academic and artistic discourse. One misses the dialogue with other practitioners or with theoretical perspectives, except for the few philosophical sources mentioned above. The limited literature review weakens the credibility of his theoretical framework and makes it difficult to situate the work within contemporary sound studies or bio-art research.

The structuring of the thesis is much closer to a philosophical narrative than to a scientific report. The chapters are more intuitively than logically connected. Because explicit methodological framing is absent, the reader has to reconstruct the logic of the experiments from poetic descriptions. For example, the sonification tests with fermentation are told in narrative terms, sometimes mentioning sensors, mappings, and feedback without providing detailed diagrams, lists of parameters, or reproducible data.

From a communicational point of view, the thesis is well-written and easy to read. Palekas’s prose is expressive and reflective; his philosophical passages are a pleasure to read. At the same time, this lyricism too often supplants analytical clarity. The experimental results remain fuzzy; the measurements are given “by ear,” not through numerical analysis, and the reader cannot tell whether the effects observed are significant or only subjective impressions.

In scope and depth, the thesis is ambitious but uneven. It tries to combine philosophy, biology, and sound art, but the practical documentation remains superficial. The experiments are deficient in calibration and control conditions, as well as in quantitative evidence. The author himself recognizes that fermentation is hardly predictable and thus difficult to reproduce. But this admission only underlines the fragility of his conclusions. Without a presentation of clear data or even replicable protocols, the whole project remains conceptual rather than empirical.

Partial accuracy and attention to detail: the author provides some information about equipment and process – for example, relative calibration among the CO₂ sensors, use of Arduino, Pure Data, but no consistent system is provided for reporting values, frequencies, and time spans. References made to appendices and videos are incomplete, and none of the referred sound recordings and codes are available. The result is that the project cannot be scientifically evaluated or reproduced.

The section on literature review reflects selectivity: In situating his thought within broader ecological and philosophical frameworks, Palekas barely engages the rich corpus of research on bio-sonification, microbial sensing, and feedback sound systems. The lack of these sources increases the effect of isolation: the thesis feels self-contained rather than in conversation with a field.

This gap between theory and documentation is where the quality of the artifact is questioned. The installations and performances he describes conceptually are incompletely and poorly documented. It is not clear if the works were created for this thesis or collated from previous projects. Without recordings, schematics, or step-by-step documentation available, one cannot evaluate any artistic or technical outcomes. Put differently, Microbiophonic Emergences is a strong artistic and philosophical statement, but it is only a partially successful academic thesis. Its conceptual strength comes from the ethical rethinking of listening, the poetic vision of sound as life, and the attempt to dissolve the hierarchy between observer and observed.

The work unfortunately lacks in methodological rigor, detailed evidence, and sufficient contextual grounding. While Palekas seeks to establish a dialogue between humans and microbes, the outcome is just speculative and remains unverified. This invention of bi-directional sonification is not really new; moreover, the thesis overlooks the numerous past projects that have already elaborated on a similar feedback relationship between sound and living systems. Overall, the work is successful as a reflective, imaginative exploration of sound and ecology but fails as a systematically researched academic document. While the work evokes curiosity and wonder, it requires far stronger methodological and contextual grounding to meet the standards of a master’s thesis.

Evaluation of a Master’s thesis

Autor: Matthias Müller, BSc
Titel: Applying Service Design on Free Open Source Software (FOSS)
Erscheinungsjahr: 2017
Hochschule: Graz University of Technology
Master: Software Development and Business Management
Quelle: https://repository.tugraz.at/publications/yq1qq-qwe76

This master’s thesis takes a closer look at how open-source software projects actually work. While open-source tools are built “by users, for users” and have changed the tech world in many ways, their success often depends on more than good code. The author uses service design methods to explore the Austrian open source project “Catrobat”, mapping everyone involved, their roles, and how they work together. The goal is to find out what helps or holds back open-source projects and how better collaboration and understanding can lead to more innovation long-term success.

Presentation quality 

Overall, the master’s is well made, the layout is simple yet fitting, since the layout itself probably wasn’t part of the scope. Simple paragraphs, some graphics and pictures, highlighted quotes, nothing special, although you could find some gaps in the text due to the full justification. Long, bloated sentences and swollen language make the text difficult to read. But the arguments made follow a logically form, from explaining the open-source context to applying service design tools.

Degree of innovation & independence

What stood out to me is how service design is connected to the world of open-source software, since any design practices are usually hard to be implemented into open source projects. The work shows a high level of independence, especially in how the author adapts existing design tools to fit the unique dynamics of Catrobat. Although making assumptions for the whole world of open source might be a bit farfetched, since open source projects can be very different, not only in size but number of users, supporters or funders, distribution channels and much more. Meaning this is a great case study but doesn’t really contribute to making the open source more design friendly.

Organization and structure 

The thesis is well structures, although sometimes hard to understand. The author is very thorough, service design & Catrobat are both very well defined and explained. Before using a service design tool, the author explains the reason for using it first, explains the process, shows the results and their conclusion in the end. The flow of the work seems natural, and additionally the usage of graphics and pictures, as well as bullet points really help to clarify.

Communication 

Like I have said before, the language is hard to understand, or in other words very academic. However, this might just be due to my background being in design and not more science driven studies, like computer science or information technology. In the eyes of a student of the technical university of Graz, the tone might be common.

Scope 

The topic is handled with an appropriate level of detail overall, although personally I would have pot emphasis on different topics, as the author did. Catrobat is explained in a lot of detail, while user research or testing of proposed improvements fell short, although those are key elements of servicer design.

Accuracy and attention to detail 

Citations are well made, if they are taken word by word, they are visually different from the rest of the text. Footnotes as well as inline citations are flawless and all figures are accurately described. I also couldn’t find any grammar or spelling mistakes, luckily writing software like microsoft word gets better at catching those mistakes.

Literature 

The literature review is solid, with relevant sources from design, service research, and technology studies. It combines classic design theory with more recent publications about open collaboration. The references are well integrated and show that the author understands the academic conversation around the topic

My personal reason to pick out a master’s thesis like this one was to get a better grasp on open source in general, since I want to write my thesis about the same topic, although with a different scope. I used this exercise to get more insight into the opinions of non designers working on open source software. But as I pointed out, grasping the topic and the conclusion was hard, due to me not being able to understand and comprehend the way sentences were written.

Disclaimer:
This blog post was supported by AI (ChatGPT) to help with structuring and phrasing.

Zwischen Bild und Ton – Kritische Bewertung der Masterarbeit “Automatic Sonification of Video Sequences” von Andrea Corcuera Marruffo

Grundlegendes

Autorin: Andrea Corcuera Marruffo
Titel: Automatic Sonification of Video Sequences through Object Detection and Physical Modelling
Hochschule: Aalborg University Copenhagen
Studiengang: MSc Sound and Music Computing
Jahr: 2017

Die Arbeit von Andrea Corcuera Marruffo untersucht die automatische Erzeugung von Foley-Sounds aus Videosequenzen. Ziel ist es, audiovisuelle Inhalte algorithmisch zu sonifizieren, indem visuelle Informationen, z.B. Materialeigenschaften oder Objektkollisionen, mithilfe von Convolutional Neural Networks (nutzung des YOLO models) analysiert und anschließend physikalisch modellierte Klänge synthetisiert werden. Damit positioniert sich die Arbeit an der Schnittstelle von Klangsynthese, teilweise software und coding und Wahrnehmung, ein Feld, das in der Medienproduktion wie auch in der künstlerischen Forschung zunehmende Relevanz besitzt und entsprechend auch überschneidungen zum Grundkonzept meiner vorstehenden Masterarbeit.

Das „Werkstück“ besteht aus einem funktionalen Prototypen, der Videos analysiert, Objekte klassifiziert und deren Interaktionen in synthetisierte Klänge übersetzt. Ergänzt wird dieses Tool durch eine Evaluation, in der audiovisuelle Stimuli hinsichtlich ihrer Plausibilität und wahrgenommenen Qualität getestet werden.

Bewertung

systematisch anhand der Beurteilungskriterien des Studiengangs CMS

(1) Gestaltungshöhe

Die Arbeit zeigt eine sehr gute technische Tiefe und eine klare methodische Struktur. Der Aufbau ist logisch, die Visualisierungen (z. B. Flussdiagramme, Spektrogramme) sind nachvollziehbar und unterstützen das Verständnis des Prozesses.

(2) Innovationsgrad

Der Ansatz, Foley-Sound automatisch (unter dem Einsatz von „physical modelling“) zu generieren, wurde zum Zeitpunkt der Veröffentlichung (2017) nur vereinzelt erforscht. Die Verbindung von Object Detection und Physical Modelling stellt daher einen innovativen Beitrag im Bereich „Computational Sound Design“ dar.

(3) Selbstständigkeit

Die Arbeit zeigt eine deutliche Eigenleistung. Die Autorin erstellt ein eigenes Dataset, modifiziert Trainingsdaten und implementiert das YOLO Model in einer angepassten Form. Auch die Syntheseparameter werden experimentell abgeleitet. Die Eigenständigkeit ist daher sowohl konzeptionell als auch technisch vorhanden.

(4) Gliederung und Struktur

Die Struktur folgt einem klassischen wissenschaftlichen Aufbau. Theorie, Implementierung, Evaluation, Schlussfolgerung. Kapitel sind klar fokussiert, jedoch teils stark technisch geprägt, was die Lesbarkeit für fachfremde Leser einschränken kann. Eine visuellere Darstellung der Evaluationsmethodik hätte das eventuell verbessert.

(5) Kommunikationsgrad

Die Arbeit ist insgesamt verständlich und präzise formuliert. Fachtermini werden sorgfältig eingeführt, Abbildungen sind beschriftet und logisch eingebunden. Der sprachliche Stil ist sachlich, allerdings manchmal zu stark an technischer Dokumentation orientiert. Narrative Reflexionen zu Designentscheidungen oder ästhetischen Überlegungen fehlen weitgehend, was anhand des Studiengangs, welcher sich nicht hauptsächlich an design orientiert verständlich und nachvollziehbar ist.

(6) Umfang der Arbeit

Mit über 30 Seiten Haupttext und zusätzlichem Anhang ist der Umfang angemessen. Die Balance zwischen Theorie, Umsetzung und Evaluation ist gelungen. Die empirische Studie mit 15 Proband bleibt jedoch relativ klein, wodurch die statistische Aussagekraft begrenzt ist.

(7) Orthographie, Sorgfalt und Genauigkeit

Die Arbeit ist durchgängig formal korrekt und methodisch sorgfältig dokumentiert. Kleinere sprachliche Unschärfen („he first talkie film“) mindern den Gesamteindruck kaum. Zitate und Quellenverweise sind konsistent.

(8) Literatur Das Literaturverzeichnis zeigt eine solide theoretische Fundierung. Es werden gängige Quellen zu Sound Synthesis, Modal Modelling und Neural Networks verwendet (Smith, Farnell, Van den Doel). Allerdings wären aktueller Medien- oder Wahrnehmungsforschung (durch z. B. Sonic Interaction Design, Embodied Sound Studies) noch eine spannende Ergänzung hinsichtlich Forschungsliteratur gewesen.

Abschließende Einschätzung

Insgesamt überzeugt die Arbeit durch ihren innovativen Ansatz, die methodische Präzision und die gelungene Umsetzung eines komplexen Systems. Die Evaluation zeigt kritisch die Grenzen des Modells auf (Objektgenauigkeit und Synchronisationsprobleme), was die Autorin reflektiert und nachvollziehbar einordnet.

Stärken: klare Struktur, hohes technisches Niveau, origineller Forschungsansatz, eigenständige Implementierung.
Schwächen: begrenzte ästhetische Reflexion, kleine Stichprobe in der Evaluation, eingeschränkte Materialvielfalt.